转学申请 Top30 Personal Statement 干货正式出炉

  转学申请 Top30 Personal Statement 干货正式出炉

为了备战即将到来的 转学申请 关键期(不错,UC系列学校的转学申请11月30日就要截止了!),相信很多西兰花的粉丝们都知道,咱们最近开通了美国转学互助群!从今天起,美国转学要重磅推出:百篇名校Top30 Personal Statement 干货的分享和点评系列文章!由于版权和篇幅限制,我们只把PS原文节选在微信推送文章中定期发布。如果想看完整的文章,想获得更多讨论和点评PS的机会,欢迎大家加入美国转学互助群(添加厚仁学术哥微信号wholerenguru3,要求入群即可)~这么好的机会,你怎可错过?!转学申请

被UCLA录取的Personal Statement




Describe the world you come from – for example, your family, community or school –and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

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Personal Statement(节选)

In grade eleven, I was elected to the students’ council. This gave me access to the school’s resources, something that has been yet another factor in deciding the progression of my academic career; the support of other council members. Since we shared interests and were in the good books of our teachers, we seldom hesitated in talking to them (and sometimes, directly to our principal) about something we wanted to do. In hindsight, this was a huge privilege, and was only possible in a relatively small school like mine.

By mid-2012, I became rather good at programming, and felt the school curriculum did not challenge me enough. My friends had similar opinions, so we decided to form an IT club in school, which would train members for inter-school programming events. The ‘Endofline Computer Club’ was officially recognized by the school in July 2012. Subsequently, we started participating in many inter-school programming events. But for me, it wasn’t always about the trophy or cash prize — it was about interacting with fellow programmers and learning from them.

Getting to meet interesting people was a great incentive for participation. The prospect of winning was always pushing me to give my best. There are small schools, small communities, which foster better understanding and interaction between their members, give each member the chance to express their ideas and make it easier to be at the top. Even good enough to be a representative — and there are huge schools — large, rigid communities that have established institutions which admit members based on merit. These institutions are full of highly able individuals that have gone through rigorous selection procedures, and perform consistently well in their respective field. I wonder if I’d have ever found a new club at a huge school. Thankfully, my school lies right at the cusp. It is small enough for a student to receive ample attention, and has a wide-spread network of alumni as well.

Throughout high-school, I’ve had opportunities to network with some of the brightest students of the country and from abroad. Along with the support of family and friends, they always encouraged me to follow my dreams and achieve excellence. And that’s precisely what I want to do; become an excellent aerospace engineer.







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